一面墙对另一面墙说,我们墙角见

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[i=s] 本帖最后由 DejaVu 于 2009-1-17 05:37 PM 编辑 [/i]

dont get too personal here, it's a parody dont you see
amphigory works better
 
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老子就是发骚 怎样
行道树 发表于 2009-2-2 04:45 PM
Oh no no, not at all.
It's just that with such strong undertone you desiderate so much to impress, that's not what writing is about.
 
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[i=s] 本帖最后由 潇湘妃竹 于 2009-2-3 06:40 AM 编辑 [/i]

10# DejaVu
哈哈哈!!!
两个d打头的同学好搞笑呀~~~

说实话这种东西看多了,我都快吐了,lz能不能换个风格阿。。。
我就用中文来阐述一下两位英文同学说的吧:lz 太逊了~~~
 

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[i=s] 本帖最后由 cassiopeium 于 2009-2-2 05:15 PM 编辑 [/i]

10# DejaVu

Nothing wrong about attempting to impress ppl; what matters is that how well it can be done.
达人 发表于 2009-2-2 04:36 PM
i beg to differ, Tolstoy didn't sit down to write "War and Peace" because he wanted to make a name for himself. He HAD to write it.

ppl like 郭敬明 write for the vainglory.